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Friday, July 11, 2008

the lonely airport road

the road to the old airport was deserted....the old airport..once the hub of activity in the city was all quiet...just like an graveyard...lost and forgotten....the new airport was now the upcoming part of the city...build to perfection..nearing almost all international standards...it was the pride of the city...

the pride of the old airport was almost fading away with no one walking the roads that led to the arrival and departure terminals...but in all this...it was one of the quietest place just a step away from the shimmering main road...a nice place to go and walk in the morning and evening...a nice place to sit in the green lawns and just get lost in your thoughts...a nice place to walk hand in hand with your loved ones.....

unlike his daily routine...today he came for the jogging a bit early...probably about 30mins early....the road was deserted...with just a few people lazing around here n there in the lawns surrounding the road...he started with the brisk walk....he walked the first lap pretty fast...he knew soon he would have to start the jogging....so on the second lap he started jogging....halfway through the lap he saw a girl also there doing a brisk walk...he could just see her from the corner of the eye as he had almost crossed her by the time he had noticed her....at the half way mark he turned around to see who she was.....so he jogged down slowly to catch a glimpse...but she was walking on the other side of the road....so he jogged faster to complete this lap and catch her on the next lap....

this time he slowed down his pace....he planned to cross her when she was under the street light so that he could get a good look at her....as he neared her...he saw her...she was just amazing...her hair..which was open...shinning black under the soft light of the neon light...kept coming in front of her face..but didnt bother her..as she neared the streetlight ...he saw her face...so soft and cute...and yet so simple...a bead of sweat just went down from her forehead as they crossed each other....he looked back....she just kept walking....he sped up...completed the lap and turned back again so that he could get a look at her again...

he turned and slowed down...this time he jogged back on the same side of the road...she had already started her walk back after completing her lap...he slowly jogged towards her so that the timing would be perfect when they cross each other under the street light..as they neared each other...she looked up...he was already looking at her..while jogging at his slowest...she saw him looking at her...he was taken aback...so he tried to look away...but then he saw her smile...and he looked at her again...she was smiling as she crossed him...he smiled back and kept jogging...

he sped up...he was smiling...he was happy...maybe he could see her smile again...he completed the lap and turned back....she hadnt turned back...she kept walking and turned into the colony gate...he saw her turn...he looked down..but he knew he had to complete the lap...so he slowly jogged to the end of the lonely road...as soon as he reached there...he took a deep breath and then when he turned...what he saw..made him smile...she was standing at the gate..she smiled...he was short of breath after the jogs..but managed to smile back...she turned and walked back home with a small dance step...he smiled and started walking back home...he knew he would see her tomorrow again...atleast he was hoping and praying he would....

the lonely airport road...wasnt lonely anymore :)

this is a pure piece of fiction


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a nice ad that came on TV recently


31 comments:

ash89 said...

awww so cute!

I'm Alive! said...

This was one of the best piece!
Kudos to the fighter..!!.

http://sachi-mahajan.blogspot.com/

Mysterious Mia said...

ah nice one.....if u hadn't mentioned that this is fiction wud have thought its yur story.... n why do i feel its still yru story eh?

rantravereflect/ jane said...

awwwww... tat ws a veryyyy younggg version of jogger's park.. n darnnnn cuteeeeeeee...
i meannn soo simple, ut sooo cuteee..

sooo did ya meet her again>>>

rantravereflect/ jane said...

n i loved the ad.. haven't seen it on tv!! vaaaat an ad!! awesum!

maverick said...

@ash89...thanks..glad u liked it :)

maverick said...

@sachi....thanks..well i ve written some more too...u can check the old posts :)

maverick said...

@princess mia...lol...when it is not fiction..i do mention that as it not being entirely fiction...

maverick said...

@rantra...lol...as i mentioned it was pretty much a work of fiction...so how could i met her again?? :D

maverick said...

@rantra...the ad is awesome...

Solitaire said...

Bahut acche!!
Mere saath toh yeh hoga nahi cos I don't jog! :)

BTW, apna psychobabble shuru ho gaya phir se! :)

maverick said...

@solitaire...lol...well all u need to do is a walk :D

and will check out ur other blog soon :)

humbl devil said...

oye..fir mili kya???
:D

maverick said...

humble devil...oye fiction hai...

joie de vivre said...

kya baat hai..
nice hai bohot aapka lonely airport..
liked it!!
and yes ad bhi shandarr hai

Gunjan Aylawadi said...

i doubt if its really fiction ;)

Nature Nut /JJ Loch said...

Maverick, your fiction is getting better and better. I thought it was true and was imagining all the calories you were burning for those special glances. :D

Hugs, JJ

maverick said...

@joidevivre..lol..thanks..and welcome to the blog :)

maverick said...

@gunj...well it pretty much is....

maverick said...

@jj...ha ha...i need to burn the calories as it is....and well it was truely a fictional story

Keshi said...

there's some truth in this story right...? :)

Keshi.

maverick said...

@keshi...total piece of fiction..except for the jogging which is real time :)

Chakoli said...

LOL...
is it true??

cud be...u keep on flying na;-))

yup ad is damn cute:))

maverick said...

@chakoli...lol..well it is truely a piece of fiction :)

Keshi said...

ok then :)

btw come n ans my qn to ya, in my comment reply.

Keshi.

maverick said...

@keshi...already answered :)

Keshi said...

tnxx!

So wussup with the Mav today? :)

Keshi.

maverick said...

@keshi...ntn much..jus some work :)..how r things at ur end?

Keshi said...

ok :)

very busy over here! I need a holiday.

Keshi.

maverick said...

@keshi...pack ur bags n come to india :)

IncorrigibleV said...

v cute... :) i cud picture it