Captains log

Visit my new blog -

Maverick The Story Teller

If you are here...don't feel shy to say hi!!

well life start with strangers..that is the principle of life..each electron.proton.neutron is a stranger to each other but they still exist as an atom...

-maverick

*PS - All views here are my own and personal views.

Thursday, April 3, 2008

lost...n found

the view frm the glass window was so amazing....it was as if he was flying in the air....just the clouds...the slowly setting sun.. the orange-greyish coloured sky...and him sitting in his plush comfortable chair...listening to the sound of his own breathing and ntn else....no one else to take away this beautiful sight away from him......

he could see different shades of grey formed by the water present in the clouds...so different was the amount of water present in them that the rays of sun could produce small small rainbows there itself....he would wanted to venture out and touch those clouds...catch a few if possible...but it was so damn cold outside that if he even put his finger it...all he would have is frozen meat to take back home...so he went back to looking at the modern art that the sun rays were drawing on the canvas of clouds.....felt like heaven to him...as tht is how heaven is always described in the books he had read so far...

he turned around and something caught his eye....he looked back.....it was still there...but a lil faint this time...he looked closely with immense concentration...and he saw a face of a woman there..a mysterious woman he had never seen before...an imaginary face....one that u dont identify with anyone in particular..but then shes the one u would want to spend ur life with...slowly the face disappeared in the fading clouds as the wind dispersed them away...he then realised it had started raining n that what he saw was just the awesome effect the sun's rays and produced on the rain bearing clouds....and he smiled to himself....

whammmmmm!!!...suddenly the sky was filled with a roar...the enemy plane just flew besides him...he should ve spotted it earlier....damn...he said to himself...looked around from his cockpit...it was getting dark...he knew his Su 30MKI was much superior to the enemy plane..he then put the speed of his plane to mach 2 and went off after the enemy plane......the dog fight would be fun...he knew it...it was what he had waited for so long...

well this was another attempt at a short story kinda thing...was getting bored studying so wrote it...do leave ur comments abt it..and also please checkout the post below with the video and lemme knw if u liked it or not

Some videos of a song i simply adore..chk them out

Video 1

Video 2

Video 3

cheers!!

49 comments:

freesherry said...

wow maverick.. the description was beautiful and the end was a big wham surprise.. could never have guessed it
excellent job :)

Lena said...

beautiful description :)
You give me a damn tough competition with your stories ;)

Really a good one :)

Nature Nut /JJ Loch said...

Maverick, you have great insight into characterization.

Hugs, JJ

maverick said...

@sherry...lol..tht was a first attempt at writing something different..glad u liked the ending :)

maverick said...

@lena...thnx..competition with u..no way :D

maverick said...

@jj..good to see ur drop by..seems such a longtime since u came by..well i just wrote this as it came to my mind... :)

Vandita said...

loved the description... and i kinda knew the end was comin :)
waise yeh lost n found title ka logic samajh nahi aaya

maverick said...

@vandita..lol...tum to smart nikli..abhi tak only u knw that the end was coming :D

lost n found ka logic hai...socho thoda sa :D

--Jignyanshu -- said...

-beautiful description man--

maverick said...

@jigyanshu....welcome to my blog...glad u liked it mate :)

elusive said...

heya..
thanks for droppin by..ya am better now :)
shall come bak later n read ur post..have a nice day!

maverick said...

@elusive...ok cool...hope u have a great day too :)

d SINNER!!! said...

nice :)

maverick said...

@d sinner...thnx :)

Trinity said...

Fighters Always Fight. Quite Logical but Impressive. Nice blog you got !!

maverick said...

@trinity...well thnx...welcome to my blog..glad u liked it :)

mohit said...

an extremely vivid description with lots of finesse..!! The story made me visualize everything..!! Was fun reading it
Great Job... kewl writin skills :)

maverick said...

@mohit...thnx buddy...glad u liked it :)

elusive said...

hey nice story..the end was whacky..loved it!

maverick said...

@elusive..thanks for finding out time to read it..glad u liked it :)

Sourish Karmakar said...

one word to describe it

vivid

maverick said...

@sourish...thnx mate...welcome to my blog :)

Keshi said...

good writeup Mav.

keshi.

maverick said...

@keshi...thnx...morning...how r u??have a great weekend :)

Solitaire said...

wow so much emotion before a fight?!

maverick said...

@solitaire...thts how soldiers are :)..seen Black Hawk Down???theres this conversation between Eric Bana n Josh Hartnett...where Bana says that once the first bullet fizzes pass u...all emotions n all go to hell..then its just abt the man next to u n u...thts all :)

Anonymous said...

so ur mba coming to end sir. i m back.

maverick said...

@ashu...wb...yep...another 7-8 days to go :)

Meghan said...

you have a really great way of painting words onto a page that makes them so bright and colourful for us readers. thanks:)

Pri said...

u have this thing about airplanes and their hostesses dont u? ;)

maverick said...

@meghan....wow..thts some compliment...thnx gorgeous :)..glad u liked the shorty story :)

maverick said...

@pri...lol...well i do ve a thing for fighter aircraft...i wanted to b an airforce pilot...

and i ve a thing for good looking women...they are attractive :)

kimberlie said...

nice! And like everyone elses comments- great description, especially the clouds.

maverick said...

@kimberlie...thnx...glad u liked the description.. :)

The Horny Bitch said...

Nice description. At least u didn't go watch tv when u're not studying.. haha

Mez said...

U can consider become a long story writer too :)

maverick said...

@thb...lol...well i dont watch tv her e as it is :D

maverick said...

@mez...lol...long story ke liye long story bhi honi chahiye :D

gunj said...

dis post reminds me of d following lines
i saw ur face
in a crowded place
n i dunno what to do
coz ill neva be with u!

maverick said...

@gunj..nice lines...


i saw ur face
in a crowded place
n i dunno what to do
coz ill neva be with u!


if i was to write some lines they would be like this

i saw ur face
in a crowded place...
n i dunno wat to do...
but i knw i ll find u

gunj said...

lol...love ur optimism !!:)

maverick said...

@gunj...as i said in ur blog...theres always hope :)...optimism comes from hope...sometimes the hope is against hope hopen..but even then its still there :)

Anonymous said...

wow..... maybe its cause i have similar dreams or sumhiing.... but the story was wonderfulllllllll .... damn.... its what he had waited for all his life... woooooooooooooow..!!!!! superb ending paaji......

Anonymous said...

boss do u have old posts aise type ke stories ke>??? if hai to plz pass me the link..my connection is crapy aur ek ek post dekhne time lag jayega

Anonymous said...

well u lovvveeeee fighter planes/ jets [ ok dnt knw.. what the correct for 'em is] and it shows :)

yu knw what.. yu did a very good job.. i was surprised at the end though! and the description of the women.. was wow!

does that really happen?

maverick said...

@samby..lol...well u ll realize ur dream soon...good luck with it...well this was my 2nd attempt..will leave the link for the other story on ur blog :)

maverick said...

@veens...lol..the end was the surprise :D

n wat happens in real life??

Spiky Zora Jones said...

mav...whever youcan paint a story as you would a painting youhave done well. When ever youcan write a story and let the reader get into the the head of the characters...he or she has done well...My friend you have done well. You look into your hear when you write...it suits you, my friend. Keep writing and always let us see with colors.

ciao babes....:D

maverick said...

@spiky...wow..tht was a huge compliment..it was just a simple story..glad u liked it :)..thnx a ton :)