She tapped him on the shoulder...he came out of his own world and looked at her....and then at the glass of water in her hand...she had a slight smile on her face...he took the glass from her and took a sip...she moved off...but he kept looking at her...the glass with half the water still in there...he was jus waiting for her to turn back n look at him again....as soon as she reached the end of the corridor..she turned back to look back..n then her hair fell over here face..covering one eye..n she looked through the hair...n he knew ...that she knew he was looking at her...
He looked away towards the window...and then picked up the magazine kept on the desk in front of him and started browsing through the various articles...some were on politics..talking about international and national issues..some talked about sports...some about fashion...but he wasnt reading them..he was thinking about her...the way the hair came up on her face n covered her face...he was thinking if he was with her on a vacation..spending a calm evening on the lonely beach with just the sea to give them company and the camp fire....
As lost he was in his thoughts...he didnt see her come up to him...she told him..."dinner is ready"...and she brought some food over...she wasnt feeling hungry so she served him the food and went back...he ate a few pieces of the chicken..it was good...after all she had served it to him..how couldnt it be good...he was thirsty n the glass in front of him was empty..he thot there was water...but thirst had taken over...he called for her to get him some water...she brought some water over...she started pouring the water in the glass..he looked at her...she looked at him...their eyes met for the first time..it seemed the time had stopped for a few seconds...the glass filled up...n before it could spill out..the trance was broken..she looked down..the hair covered her face..n then in a split second she backed off and went back to the end of the corridor to her room..to her abode...he just kept looking..and then finally drank a sip of the water..
He threw the tray in the trash can outside...and went back to his seat...closed his eyes and just relaxed...time just seemed to drift away.....he was lost in his world...and then there was a voice calling to him...he opened his eyes...it was her...she was there..standing with the hair falling over her face ever so slightly..made her look like a dream...and then she took up the onboard mic and said....."Ladies and Gentlemen, we will be landing in a few minutes...thank you for flying with us...hope u had a great flight and look forward to serving u again"...
He smiled to himself...he didnt even get to realize how time had flown by...and he knew he should have told her "you have the most amazing eyes" when their eyes had met...but now he was climbing down the steps of the aircraft..and she was there inside...lost in her own world..and he didnt know if he would see her again...he smiled...and looked back...she was there at the gate..smiling....this is what he had been waiting for..to see her smile back before he goes off in off in to the swarm of people at the airport..and he looked at her and said to himself...."yes..."...he knew he cud fall in love again...
guys this is my first attempt at trying to write a story..so pardon the inconsistencies...hope u like it...:D
btw ur views on the 2 posts below are still welcome..hope u contribute :)
64 comments:
Not bad at your first attempt! In fact, very good. Reminded me of a couple that I know. The guy fell in love with the air hostess, proposed to her, married her, and been married for the past 25 years!
Accha hain...good work to begin with:-)hope to see many more stories...btw,u also had met sum great air hostess rite?????newez,gud work!!!
I thought u were gonna put a pic of my eyes...duh!
Keshi.
@solitaire...thnx...well thts good to knw :)
@wonderful...thanx...lets see if i write more stuff up :)
@keshi...aye aye captain
into writing stories, huh??
was a nice first attempt. You can give it a second try ;)
@lena...lol...not into them..jus gave it a try...will write something if i get some thots going :)
Hey this is Keshi's pic right?
@mez..lol...read the comments above....
great attempt thr...u shud do more of these
n y is keshi complainin? they are already her eyes..inne?
@gunj...lol..thnx...pehle nahi thi...baad main daali...
woooooooooooooow is all i can say :P
@divya...lol...say something more too :)
Telme...why she sayin no if itz herz only..huh
@mez...pehle nahi thi woh pic.. :D
That was delicious, Maverick! I love the imagery of the glass of water and the tension building in the story. And then to find it was a daydream! You're a natural. Had me spellbound.
Thanks for a great start to the day.:D
Hugs, JJ
Kya baat hai Mav, not bad not bad at all...infact till i hadn't come to the end i was really thinkin ki kuch aur hoga but "ladies and gentlemen" padhte hi i exclaimed "lord this is soo you:P"
very gripping...:)
PS: congozzzz we won!!
@jj..glad u liked it...it was my first attempt :)
@vandita...lol..."it was so you"..wats dat suppose to mean? :D
and congos to u too :)
wow Keshi di aankhein raat bhar soyi nahi.........
Aankhen bhi hoti he dil ki jubaaa, bin bole kar deti he dil ke yeh halat bayan
Kali kali aankhen yeh gore gore gall.......
ankhiyo ke jharokhe se jo dekha maine saaware
ok so this many songs dedications to keshi s eyes :)))
usne kaha aur tumne laga bhi diye praji, sahi he :)) mezie ka post padh ke likha tha kya yeh post ?
@ashu g...apko to antakashri main part lena chahiye..lol...
aankhon ki antakshari ? i remember one akshay kumar song on aankhein, dont recall it rt now, but its very apt for this post....
@ashu g..lol..khelo jitni antakshri khelni hai :D
LOL u r such a cheeky guy Mav...hahaha u replaced those beautiful eyes with my plain eyes. awwwwwwww HUGS! But I was only joking..u can put back those gorgeous eyes cmon! :)
Keshi.
hehe Ashu tnxx hun! I was only teasing Mav and look wut he did LOL!
Keshi.
@keshi...lol..no..now this pic shall remain here :D
awwwwwwww...I feel so dumb for teasing ya b4 LOL!
Keshi.
@keshi...lol...savour the moment..take a sunbath in the glory of feeling dumb...lol :D
that was good.. and quite original
I seem to recall you have a thing for air hostesses :D
@sherry..lol..i ld like to phrase it as..i have a thing for gorgeous women who can carry themselves well... :D
hey keshi i hope u did understand the hindi lyrics, for any help contact mav, he is master of hindi!!!
@ashu g...tussi antakshri khelogi n i ll translate lyrics...chalo theek hai...
I really enjoyed your story. You did a nice job for a first try:)
@dollface...good to see u again...and thanks....lets see how the story writing goes :)
u got me man! I thought it was some erotic story.. Flight attendants.. my my!
@thb...lol...tht must ve been really disappointing :D
Maverick, keep writing. You're talented. :D
Hugs, JJ
mav...well done. Nicely written. You surely will do more...yes? I am intrigued. Any thoughts aabout maybe writing a novella...I think you would enjoy it...Ciao babes.
Sexy eyes to for sure... dang!
Ashu tnxx hun!
hey Mav mere ko shudh Hindi nahi aati hai ;-) so plz explain LOL!
Keshi.
@jj..thanks...will write something sometime :)
@spiky...lol..no thots abt writing novels or anything..mayb will write some more short stuff tho :)
@diva..lol..glad u liked them :)
@keshi...tumhe sab samajh agaya hai...lol :D
**tumhe sab samajh agaya hai
gawwwd I need a Hindi-to-English dictionary now! LOL!
I think u said something like You're all undesrtandable? LOL!
Keshi.
@keshi...lol...i said "im sure u understood everything" :D..howdy?
lolz thats so far from how I read it!
nah I really didnt u'stand Ashu's hindi comment..she wants u the Hindi Specialist to translate it to me..plz plz plz!
*begs falling at the bottom of Mav's trousers'
LOL!
Keshi.
@keshi...here are the translations...word to word..
Ashu said...
wow Keshi di aankhein raat bhar soyi nahi.........
wow..keshi's eyes didnt sleep the entire night....
Aankhen bhi hoti he dil ki jubaaa, bin bole kar deti he dil ke yeh halat bayan
eyes are the language of the heart...without speaking they tell everything (its a song)
Kali kali aankhen yeh gore gore gall.......
black black eyes...n white white cheeks (again song)
ankhiyo ke jharokhe se jo dekha maine saaware
through your eyes i saw the morning
ok so this many songs dedications to keshi s eyes :)))
usne kaha aur tumne laga bhi diye praji, sahi he :)) mezie ka post padh ke likha tha kya yeh post ?
she told n u put them up..inspired by mezie's post
enjoy :D
good one indeed...
dsnt look like a frst attempt at all, so u can confess that u have been writing such shorties in ur secret diaries :P (i know this suits for a gal more, but the nthin bad in tryin, who knows, u might just have)
*_*
realistic pic!!!
and seemingly u travel a lot, so dnt tell me the guy in d story is 'u'
@sinner...lol..this was d first attempt...n no d guy wasnt me..even tho i do travel quite frequently..lol
arre mav ji ab tu aap bhi short story wale ho gaye.. good good
was really nice.. didn't seem like a first ever attempt :)
huhhhhhhh
I thought these were keshi's eyes and then thought that i was dumb to think that!
@solitaire..lol...made u think..lol
aww ty for that lovely translation MAV! tnxx Ashu too!
Cmon my eyes r not soooo great LOL! But thanks I feel great :) U guys r so sweet!
btw why arent u moving from this post Mav? LOL!
Keshi.
@keshi...lol...will put up a new post soon :)
*breathes a sigh of relief*
LOL!
Keshi.
@keshi..lol..done :)..should i add ur pic to it?
*chases Mav ard with a butterfly net*
oii!
Keshi.
@keshi..u ld need a bigger net...lol :D
hahaha true blondy me!
Keshi.
@keshi...lol...self discovery is the best thing..aint it :)
lol!! i knew u had this thing for airhostesses...
ahem! seems like keshi should switch careers ;)heehee
@pri...lol :D
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